I'm thankful for the nice comments about the colors but I'm also interested in constructive criticism to make better images. There are still a lot of votes at 5 or less.
I like the close up shot & the angle. I also think you made a good choice by chosing such bright & interesting pens..Kinda hard to make a pen seem interesting and you did that here. Solid 7 for me.
I really like the angle that this shot was taken from and the bright neon colors really attract the eye. The best thing about this image is how close up the pens are, it makes it a lot more interesting.