Wow, interesting way of framing... I don't like the choice of fur-lined hood - I think the texture of that fur detracts from the smoke itself framing the face. Like the way the detail and light is clear around his eyes.
I like the way you have used a smoke effect to frame this image.. you will probably get hit by the anti-smoking brigade here. On a different note, I personally would of cloned out that spot on his cheek, my eye keeps being drawn to it, maybe that was you intention to convey youth? Good effort, keep practising.. 8