Good idea, but it feels incomplete or perhaps a bit off the mark for me. I think a dirt road might have been a bit closer to my interpretation here.
From a technical point, well executed, though I do feel rather disoriented by the distortion on the trees. Thanks for sharing it.
I like the picture and the yellow line certainly draws one into the scene. My only comment would be that if the sky had cooperated with you the scene would have looked a little better, but all in all a good job.
I really like the way the line shifts left before turning right. The curve has a soothing sense to it. The only negatives is the fisheye effect of the roadside trees and the featureless white sky. By the way, shouldn't it be a DOUBLE yellow line? ;)
a road "less" traveled would look unpaved and unused this road dose not.
Also you have a keystoning problem and blowout in the sky. grayscale or sepia toning would probobly solve the blowout problem and with your composition give you a sronger image.
as for the keystoning outside of a diffrent lens and a DPCilleagle photoshop fix I don't know what to do. sorry
After the challenge I'd be intrested to see if you sent this to the fourm what beter minds come up with
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