It looks like the point of the photo is the sky. And the window could play a secondary role, just as a frame. But, this frame hurts. And I think it hurts because it looks like you didn't want the house in the left in the frame. This way you got your frame tilted, which I don't think is a good thing.
Instead, moving a bit further and including a bigger part of the window and the house might improve the photo; but then, it wouldn't be sky entrance, but window exit.
I guess I'm trying to tell you that the beautiful colours of the sky and the beautiful clouds you wanted to show to me, didn't reach me. The other things did. I guess. |