Cool idea, it must have been great fun to shoot this! I think that the contrast is a little low, and that the building wasn't a terrific choice. I'm also iffy on the fact that I can see the person making the star.
I didn't know what to think of this, but from an image perspective it didn't do much for me; shadows, coloring and focus vary from the right columns to the left, and while it looks like some kind of long exposure, I wasn't sure what was being said or why it was done this way.
The addition of a circle around the pentacle would have gone a long way to making the effect less ... intrusive.
A great image that suffers from an additional concept twist that did not come off well.
Cool...I can see your outline, but thats ok. Try standing behind the camera and using a laser pointer. With a little practice, the effect is real cool, and no ghost image.