This is definetely an interesting angle, I really enjoy your approach. The stuff at the end though is distracting from the overall feel of the picture, kind of throw off the balance. Good luck!
I think this picture needs a center of interest. Maybe a finger halfway down to keyboard? Other wise my attention goes to the clutter at the end of the keyboard.
cool idea, but I think it would have been better w/o the junk in the background -- and maybe focus on the closest black or white key instead of somewhere in the middle....
This is an awesome shot with some terrible lighting and a distracting background! If you darken the room, light the keyboard, keep the same angle, drop a cloth in front of the background stuff and you'll be right on the money. I'd like to see it if you can reshoot it! Oh big bonus because I love the originality and the shot in general!
TC
I think you could have gone very far with this photograph. Though it may be intentional on your part, I wish that the nearest black key was in focus, or more of it was in focus, a higher apeture. The blue and pinks in the back ground are distracting, I would even considering going black and white with this photograph.
DOF would have helped a bit. If the front keys were in better focus, they would have drawn the eye into the picture better. wonderful idea... I just love the piano.
I am not sure what the things at the end of the piano are, but they probably should have been removed or chopped out. Gread idea though, fits the challenge well.
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