Wonderful composition and such nice expressions on the faces. My only felling is that you could have done a lil tighter crop and maybe a lighter background- the picture rocks!
Great photo. I think the brown textured carpet is a little offputting - something plainer or more of a contrast would have worked better. I'm also not keen on the leopard print cloth as it is a bit distracting. I like the pose of the girls and their eye contact though, and the focus is great.
Beautiful girls with those intense eyes. I think what hurts this is the snapshot setup. I'd like to see a black background, no leopard scarf and no writing on the sweatshirt. If done in a more "studiolike" setting, it would be awesome. Wonderful lighting and focus.