I like the attempt to do something different. You thought behind the image are nice and so is the capture. Subtlity of the subject makes the difference between a technically perfect picture and the perfectly 'connecting' picture ( not that your picture has any technical flaw but there are many which are equally good or better technically) To me it's one of the best shots in the challenge. Good luck
Hmm. I think, to me.. she's not angry or worried looking enough to really match the environment. But I do like the concept. Composition and colors are good as well.