a true depiction of light in a barn - that broad glow from a large door shining into the gloom. i'd get rid of that clipboard ? at the top left and crop in from the bottom
Out of focus, to bright, not rugged enough. This could have been awesome too. You've got a weathered trunk and stable, but a perfectly clean shovel. And get the broom out of the way. Stables are rugged places where cowboys and ranchers come home to. Keep that in mind next time you go out to the stable.
Great composition here! It needs a big boost in the lighting though. If you had a reflector on the right hand side to bounce back some of the light from the left this would come out much nicer!!! I would love to see it reshot eventually!.
TC
Great idea doing a still life barn scene, but it looks a little out of focus and overexposed to me. I would have prefered this taken at a different angle. I also would have closed the stall door or avoided that black space on the right. Really good idea though....5