I like this alot. My only negative comment would be that its a bit too spacious (If that makes sense). I feel it would have more emotional impact if their faces were closer together and it was cropped tighter. I like the idea and the lighting though. Good Luck.
haha! This is cute. Great idea!
The contrasts are a little high and the blue takes away from the fun feeling of the picture.
But besides that, great idea!
I am having a hard time reading the looks on their faces. Are they happy that there was a collapse in the relationship? But I like the lighting and the spontineity of the moment.
Vignetting takes away from this image. Blue/Grey coloration seems out of place. Great concept and good shot. Excellent emotion in the image. Oversharpened.