Overall I like this shot. It shows a nice conceptual understanding of the challenge! Focus is a touch soft for my taste. Did you do that on purpose? From a compositional point of view, the radio is a nice touch but makes the shot a little busy with all the writing. My eye is drawn to it and cannot read it because of the soft focus and size limitations of the site. For here I would have composed it differently to have less radio and more foreground! At 8 by 10 this would be a very nice image though!
TC
I am too distracted by the words on that radio in the background, its taking my focus away from the coffee cup
I think the composition could be a little better, making the coffee the focal point
nice lighting and tones
You know, I like this shot but the second hand on the pocket watch gets me wondering. What would it have been like if you had managed to to catch this shot when the second hand was in between digits?
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