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I wish I was there to take pictures of this too. Alas, I have to settle for your flawed design elements (edited for the sake of critiscism). What I mean by this is the following: this is perfect subject matter. it's vintage. it's in beautiful condition. now, in my opinion, you need to work more on the design. first off, the rosey stain of the wood bleeds into the picture so much as to become overpowering. hopefully that's what you were going for; if not, you've got a lot of work to do. i would have taken this photo in black and white, with heavy contrasts, from an angle that stressed the technological design and not the beauty of the wood. you get a 5 also because the photograph is hazy, which makes no sense if you're trying to focus on the intricacies of the wood. too much or too little was done to this picture. |