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01/24/2007 10:45:58 PMPost actions
great idea, but it appears your focus is off just a bit. i don't mind the foreground being blownout, but would like to have seen a bit more tonal range on her face.
01/24/2007 06:17:37 PMPost actions
Just missed on the focus. The eyes are not quite there...
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01/23/2007 04:49:45 PMPost actions
I think a different time of day would help this. The shadow across her face is distracting. The leaves are also distracting, but I think it would work if more of the plants were included.
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01/23/2007 11:51:17 AMPost actions
Very nice composition and capture, too bad it's a bit blurry in her face.
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01/19/2007 11:10:30 PMPost actions
This is a great shot, but is hurt by the soft focus on her face. I like the lighting and how her face is framed by the leaves.
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01/16/2007 05:49:34 PMPost actions
The shadow across the middle of her face, leaving each eye in light with dark between them, is a distraction for me
01/16/2007 09:50:58 AMPost actions
good idea, but the photo looks kinda strange, pity that this leaf is in the way
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01/16/2007 12:46:40 AMPost actions
To mant shadows accross her face.....
01/15/2007 10:33:22 PMPost actions
I think there is too many burned out areas, and it needs to be sharper.
01/15/2007 02:40:24 PMPost actions
Beautiful subject. Unfortunately, the leaves , or whatever they are that are on the foreground distracts me from her.
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01/14/2007 10:42:29 PMPost actions
the contrast is too washed out, and i'm not sure that the soft focus works on this one.
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01/14/2007 08:02:04 AMPost actions
the shadow on her face is really distracting.focus good.
01/12/2007 09:53:56 PMPost actions
sorry to say that to me this all looks too blurry and the subject looks crosseyed.
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01/12/2007 07:32:58 PMPost actions
it's really quite messy with a lot of distracting objects, like the leaf in front of her...the focus isn't quite right, but it's a nice attempt
01/12/2007 01:49:16 PMPost actions
soft focus doesn't work very well on this one. Framing is interesting.
01/12/2007 09:07:36 AMPost actions
this is a wonderful image, the light made it a challenge, I am sure. If her eyes were a bit sharper, it would just put this one over the top.
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01/12/2007 01:38:36 AMPost actions
Cool portrait but i think you over did the NI
01/12/2007 12:41:15 AMPost actions
With her eyes in focus this would be great. IMHO they look soft.