This is a beautiful photograph. Somebody once told me something about one of my pictures that changed how I look at, and what I need to check on every picture I take with water in it. He said, make sure my water line is level. I'm just going to pass that on to you also. Good luck on your beautiful photograph.
The sun is a little too hot. On my monitor (calibrated) I can see a lens flare over the right bottom. Darkening the foreground would have eliminated that while still making the sunset spectacular. IMO.
Best: Setting, exposure
Worst: Composition...the sun is just off center and the foreground really distacts...try minimizing foreground shadows to one or two subjects and place sun more off center...