A good portrait with a nice focus on the eyes. My one suggestion is to try and have your background about 1 to 2 stops darker than your subject. In this case it would add depth to the overall composition ...my 2 cents
Good luck
Nice tonal range here. Focal point seems to be right on. I can't help but tilt my head to look at this. Not sure why, but it feels funny with her laying to the left - to the right would be more comfortable IMO. Good luck.