Nice use of depth of field. I like the way your face is framed over your shoulder. One thing I might have done differently was to darken the room behind you. That way it would be less distracting. 6.
This is ok. I like the idea of the reflection, but her back is taking up too much of the picture IMO. Also I don't like the diagonal line cutting through her head like that. There is a lot going on in this picture and my eyes are having a bit of trouble finding the main focal point. Sorry I sound so negative, but I do like the reflection idea. Maybe if it were just executed a bit differently.