The picture works much better for me with the water in the forgound cropped out starting the picture with the first the 2nd strip of rock in the foreground. it allows my eyes to admire the contrast of rock and water but yet still focus mainly on the beautiful lines and color of the light rays.
Best: Clouds and rays of light
Worst: composition...this is just one of those things that is 100x better in person...this is just so hard to capture correctly, trust me I have been in that situation too...