I like the objects you chose, especially the opened pomegranate. But I think the arrangement is somewhat lacking. I think it would be better if more of the corn was visible and if there were more than 2 levels (the fruit and the corn). Perhaps moving the pomegranate in front of the other fruit would help in both respects.
You have such a grasp of color in this picture that I could kiss you. Thank you for restoring my faith in color, in texture (there's something about fruit on a wood table that's timeless, no?), and in the potential of photographers on this site to capture such design elements.
This composition is a little 'flat' for lack of a better term. The lighting is good but you are over exposed in the highlights! I think that if you moved the camera up from the table some you would get a little more depth and more impact! I do really like the reflections on the table top itself!
TC
harsh lighting. lemon got overexposed... making the lighting more even and diffused would help. might also find a different way to arrange them so that they arent all laying in a straight line across the center of the frame.
I like the composition, but it's way overexposed (mostly the lemon). I think this could have been corrected by using more ambient light from the room in which the shot was taken.
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