These are the 7 deadly sins written in Latin. Superbia=Pride; Invidia=Envy; Ira=Wrath; Avaritia=Greed; Tristia=Sadness; Gula=Gluttony; Luxuria=Lust.
I wrote out the words on a piece of paper and the girl is my little sister. I put in the rose because I thought it would go well with the picture. I also worked on the picture in Photoshop. Thanks for voting!
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I don't know if you were intentionally going for the overly warm tones on this or not. I would like to see the paper closer to white personally by adjusting the color temp/white balance of this photo. JMO of course. :D I like the concept behind what you've done. Good luck in the challenge.
Anytime you try to capture writing on paper, the shot becomes more difficult, but I think you handled the composition very well here. The only thing I don't really like is the red colour cast, but maybe you did that to get the colours on her sweater to blend in more, rather than be distracting. I just think a nice vivid white page would bring out the wilted and faded rose more.
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