This almost has a mugshot feel to it. I'd like to see more neg. space to one side and maybe less of "deer in the headlights" expression. The focus and lighting are fine.
The tonal range is good,the sharpness is excellent and the lighting is good. I feel like I am staring back through a mirror at my neighbor first thing in the morning. I guess what I am trying to say is, I don't care for the expression.