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01/23/2007 04:26:10 PMPost actions
Way to go with your score Hanae! Great b&w portrait. You just keep getting better and better!
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01/23/2007 05:38:15 AMPost actions
Great shot Hanae. Cool subject and nice framing. Good score. My eyes would love to see a stronger gradient in the background (light around his face just the way you have it, then gradually much darker as the eye moves away from the man toward the edges of the photo). Excellent model and a very nice job!
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01/17/2007 10:56:39 AMPost actions
i liked the tones in this a bunch! you really connected with the subject.Message edited by author 2007-01-17 10:56:55.
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01/17/2007 09:02:14 AMPost actions
Congratulations on your score Hanae! I can see you are practicing for WPL4!! :o)
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01/17/2007 12:37:56 AMPost actions
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Comments Made During the Challenge
01/16/2007 06:47:43 PMPost actions
Why's the sword in this picture? I assume there's a connection but I'm not making it. Without the sword I'd give this higher points. Good Luck.
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01/15/2007 02:32:28 AMPost actions
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01/14/2007 09:36:37 AMPost actions
This is a sharp, engaging image. I like the way you've composed this. The slight angle of the head. Looking a little over his shoulder. Not sure about the sword (? actually looks more like a fencing blade perhaps ?) as it's taking me away from the person, but without it this photo would have an entirely different feel. Hmmm. Anyway, well done overall. Good luck in the challenge.
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01/13/2007 11:46:14 PMPost actions
Great b&W tonal range. Well done!
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01/13/2007 11:25:52 PMPost actions
Really well lit and exposed. 9
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01/12/2007 01:59:50 PMPost actions
...quiet power...nice feeling Chaz.
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01/11/2007 09:08:08 PMPost actions
Yeah, awesome. Great tonal range. Your subject's expression is good. I think the background could have been different, but so what.
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01/11/2007 05:41:23 PMPost actions
nice composition and eye contact
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01/11/2007 05:17:10 PMPost actions
The sword distracts my eye and mind...
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01/11/2007 01:35:09 PMPost actions
Great capture of the face but "do not cut your subject in their joints" and this was cropped right on the wrist. Not a big deal though. 7
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01/10/2007 07:06:49 PMPost actions
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01/10/2007 12:03:53 PMPost actions
Great picture. I like the lighting. I wish I could see more of what's in his hands. A sword I'm guessing? -7
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01/10/2007 07:19:10 AMPost actions
excellent image - love the lighting and expression
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