There's just something about the lighting in this one on her face that isn't quite there. Not sure what it is but, it needed something more. Perhaps, having closed in a bit more on her face in the shooting????
Nice smile. I personally would have liked to see more of her head and less of her body. I find it looks odd having her head cut off at the top and side. The pic also looks a little purple. Maybe just my monitor though
Im not so keen on the conversion here, she has been left with rather white blotches around the eyes and mouth. Perhaps a different channel mix Good Luck 4