I don't mean this in a bad way at all, but this looks like a snap shot, not in quality of photo but in composition. the two guys in the background really add to that effect, along with the bar scene. And then you can see that the flash was on and that you were slightly too close. One girl has her eyes closed, while the other one is looking at the camera. Either both looking at eachother, both looking at the camera, or both eyes closed would have been better.