first submission with my new superwide tokina 12-24
thanks to asij for moddeling in this shot.
if i had more time to do it, i'd have done some things differently...
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something about this looks strange, cant put my finger on it. The guy looks blurry, the sky looks wonderful though. He seems to have a little haloing around him, perhaps from oversharpening. its nice though, 5. Would have been much higher with more sharpness in the guy.
Nice night shot. If you'd turned the model's head away, looking out into the distance, it might have conveyed the idea of 'far away' better by directing the viewer's interest into the distance, and you would have overcome the motion blur problem you faced on a long exposure like this (because most of him is sharp, it's just the face that is difficult to keep still).
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