A nice attempt indeed... I wish there was a little more light on her face and less on the background ... (my 2 cents) try to be at least 1-2 stops brighter on the face then your backgroud ... good luck
This is an UPLIFTING photo that I was glad to have jump on to my screen during a LONG voting process on a 500 entry contest! It made me smile ... I would have liked a bit more tonal range and focus on the face but I still have to give this a 7.
Indeed it is, but the face is in complete shadow, resulting in just a large gray area. A reflector or white posterboard held up in front of her face on the left side would have made a HUGE difference by getting some nice highlights on that side.