very nice portrait, i feel as if i might want t see just a tiny bit more detail in the right corner but i think it works well the with gradiant to shadows aswell. good work
Bit heavy on the retouch for the eyes, they kind of look painted in to me. Then again, I guess that nothing looks "real on this image, so maybe that's the point".
I love the lighting and the clarity you achieved with this shot. Also, the make-up work on the model was superb. The only gripe I have is that her lips are partially covered and since they are the focus of the title, I feel that they seem a bit too unemphasised. Still, without the title, it's an excellent portrait.
this is a great fashion photo, stellar infact. But I wish the model's face wasn't so lifeless and had a bit more character. Just my 2 cents. Definitely ribbon material, good luck!
Excellent professional studio portait but it clearly emphasize "eyes" more than "lips". Altough this should get good score here because of the beautiful model :)