Per your request from the Critique Club:
This is a humorous photo; it's easy to see that the pen is being attacked. For what it's worth, I wouldn't have even imagined a correlation to struggles in our own lives; even with your comment I have a hard time making the connection because of the whimsical nature of the photo. But that doesn't stop the photo from conveying a clear message, even if not the one you intended.
Unfortunately, the photo doesn't have much impact. It's elements don't contrast with each other enough. A black stapler with a textured finish and a harsher light to cast stronger, more distinct shadows would have been better. And here's a crazy idea: replace the background with a classic draped cloth like those used in traditional still lifes. I'm frankly not sure how that would affect the message, but it might be fun to try. |
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