Great capture, but the processing didn't quite take advantage of its potential. It looks like you had the data available for sharp, contrasty eyes, but you've left them mostly gray and soft. If you have Photoshop available, try this again with the Luko sharpening technique (search the forums). Use Channel Mixer with mostly the green channel to convert to gray, and then dodge the eyes a little in Highlight mode. It should make a HUGE difference. ;-)