I'm not sure what this is enought of, but it is very splashy and bubbly, nice. I wish the composition were a bit simpler - is that a glass? maybe we could see a bit more of it? The light is a bit glaring too.
It's cool, but it needs work. Keep trying to capture this image using different techniques, perspectives, design elements. Aim the stream of water differently, maybe. Water splashes can be beautiful, or they can just get in the way. Yours gets in the way.
I'd have given this a 10 if the sharpest focus had been in the top left - the main area of the water running from the tap. The focus seems to be on the area where the running water hits the body of water - an area that is so turbulent that its hard to tell whether it actually is pin sharp. I think selective DOF would have shown pin sharp water running into a (blurrish) maelstrom of water. Then again, I'm hardly a professional - just my own opinion!!! I do like it though - 8
still life
n. pl. still lifes
Representation of inanimate objects, such as flowers or fruit, in painting or photography.
A painting, picture, or photograph of inanimate objects.
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