Maybe too much clutter in the photo to grab the eye on any one point. Also need somewhat better focus, and some color correction. This one appears to have either too much yellow or green.
This is an idea that i myself had :-). I would've done it a little differently..but what do i know...i cant break 5.5 :-)I think that if the car wasnt surrounded my so much other irrelavant and distracting objects this would do well. I realize that some of the objects add to the theme...but i think thats a boat or something on the right..and another car peeking out..i think they detract...5