I get the idea of "needing to clean up" from this, but the image looks mainly like just a mess, and it doesn't really have all that much to catch anyone's attention. I wonder if getting a further away shot, where you'd include part of the room, maybe a vacuum cleaner or something peeking in from a side, I don't know.
I really like the colors, but I am struggling to find the focus of this shot. It feels too much like a collage, and as such it's not as striking or original to me as something with a more clearly defined subject.