CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Overall, I think this is a pretty good picture, but there are a couple of things I think would have made it more emotive with the viewers.
The lighting is good, perhaps too good. There are no shadows, and the background is a nice solid black. Perhaps using sidelighting could have cast some interesting shadows and given more "drama" to the shot.
Though you fill the frame well, it is cropped a little too tight for my personal taste and perhaps too far left in the frame. Together, these two elements make it feel off-balanced to me.
I like the desaturation, and think that it adds interest to this shot because it really makes her eyes the focus of attention.
If you have any questions or comments, feel free to contact me.
Best wishes in future challenges.
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