There's an awful lot to distract the eye here. You have good density which actually makes it harder to concentrate in the interesting parts of the photo.
Sorry...I've looked at this one a couple times now and even with the wide berth for interpretive submissions, this one just DNMC for me because it's neither in portrait orientation nor does it focus on a living subject (the title even says so). The photo is decently executed; it just cannot score well for me relative to the others in this challenge with so many superb submissions.
noun
1. a painting of a person's face
2. a word picture of a person's appearance and character [syn: portrayal]
3. any likeness of a person; "the photographer made excellent portraits"