Maybe others have mentioned that it's just a bit too flat. The contrast isn't that great. I think what's hurting it for me is the post processing; it seems to be smoothing out elements that should be clear in a portrait of a lovely subject like this. The light is otherwise nice, and her eyes are lovely in this. 5
I don't mind the soft feel but i would have liked it more with a little more sharpness around the eyes. Also, there is some graininess around the lips and hairline that takes away a little