Hi Jeb,
Couple of things I noticed on this photo. (I gave it a 5, by the way.)
1) Because you took it in direct, midday sunlight, there's a huge amount of contrast and it looks a bit flat. I'd love to see this same photo taken just after rain with a tripod and a slight warming filter.
2) I think it could stand a little bit of sharpening (unsharp mask in PS)
3) The shadow of the vine over the right side of Goggomobil does not look deliberate, and makes it hard to discern the word.
That being said, I think this is a really creative photo and solid entry. If you get a chance to photo it under some other light conditions, post back please! I love vintage captures like this. |