Excellent portrait. I do have one comment on the lighting... the shadow to the left of the frame seems to add weight, from a composition standpoint, behind the subjects. Maybe a little light on the background to balance that would help. Of course this is just an opinion.... thanks for sharing the image.
Boy, Annie Liebowitz had no idea what she was starting when she did the belly shot with Demi Moore! I see it again and again, yet this one is VERY well done. Nice composition, lighting and wonderful use of the mid range. 7