This just cries out for a leveled horizon :-( and the unnaturally flat quality of the attempted toning-down of the sun's hot spot is very offputting to me. It's an issue I've had to fight with often. Otherwise the processing is very nice, soft & glowing and warm.
A very nice candid, for sure. There's something about this shot that feels unfocus, or unconvincing to me, though. Perhaps greater contrast? Gradient? I'm not sure...but I still thinks its a very solid 6.