Well... to be honest this isn't the best shot - its a bit blown out, and the composition is too centred to create interest. But the stuff in your portfolio shows you've definately got potential, so I hope you don't get too put off by the low finish.
Your highlights are too blown out. Maybe a tissue or handkerchief over the flashlight would diffuse it enough to keep the effect without the hot spots.
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