The strawberries add some color, but it's not enough to make the image very interesting. The cloth makes a nice background at the top, but irrelevant and distracting elements show at the bottom. The glasses are distorted by the wide angle focal length, and having two of them means neither is really the center of interest. I think one glass would have made a better image. And perhaps a yellow straw would add some impact.
The glasses are lit really well, it's very impressive that there are no nasty reflections or glare. However, the composition lets it down. It doesn't seem deliberate that the edges of the glasses have been chopped off, and the point of view doesn't work IMO. 6
Good simple composition. It couls almost use one other element though. Possibly lower your anble of veiw and have a full or half cut strawberry sitting at the bottom of the glasses.
This is a very nice composition! I like the way you captured the sweat on the outside of the glass. Gives the shot a little bit of atmosphere. The crop is a little too tight on the sides for my taste and the grid on the bottom right corner of the shot is distracting. Nice job overall!
TC
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