Och, noo, its the Serious Burns Unit. The Mrs does this 'pointless leaping' thing. I just drink thier unbeleivably strong beer, and my vision goes like this after just 1/2 a pint. I'd crop in alot closer, perhaps even cropping toes to get into the movement.
This has a lot of energy going for it. The tartans and hose give a sense of location. I admire your willingness to try something different. The main problem, as I see it, is the almost totally transparent front dancer's feet. I'd like to see more detail. This is only my opinion, I apologize if you did this on purpose.
Very interesting take on the challenge. Even more interesting way to show it. My only problem is that i must assume that she is doing this gracefully :) I like the motion blur and the composition.