Excellent idea. OOBIE worthy! I think the other commenters have done a good job of figuring out how to improve the shot, and why it didn't score well. Focus always has a lot to do with the score. I'm still struggling with this 'too busy' thing in my own photos. I have yet to understand when or why something is too busy. I think the thing that is the most distracting here is the crop at the bottom that nicks off the bottom of the primary object.
I like the perspective and size comparison, but I think the idea is too random for voters. Also, you can't really see all of the toy because the bottom is cropped off.