I'm struggling to find what it is that I don't like about this shot, which has an interesting pattern and technically suitably executed shot. I think perhaps the pattern is too all-encompassing for me, and it's too simple of a pattern to carry the weight of the entire subject matter of the photo. The picture is too much pattern, without any context. While I can tell what it is (at least I think I can), something broader would have appealed to me more.