I like the unusual pose, although I'm unsure of having the rest of her arms cropped out of the frame. The skin tone is good, no harsh shadows on her face, the expression is also good. There is enough light on her hair that the shape of her head doesnt look distorted due to some of the hair blending into the background. The catchlights in the eyes and the light on her lower lip add a nice touch. The line of light above her right eyebrow could have probably been avoided with some makeup, but overall it's a good portrait.
overly processed, esp. evident in her lower torso. i think a more neutral shirt would have allowed her to stand out more. the cropping in the foreground seems a bit awkward.
Very nice lighting. Love the pose, expression and composition of this piece. The lips on her shirt are a bit distracting, but otherwise a beautiful photo. 9