Challenge:Pattern II (Basic Editing) Camera:Canon PowerShot A520 Location: Sapporo Station Date: Dec 24, 2006 Aperture: f 2.6 ISO: 200 Shutter: 1/15 Date Uploaded: Dec 24, 2006
I think cropping a quarter off the bottom and a quarter off the left AND a quarter off the top would have given this photo a LOT more impact and made it score higher.
Edit: Don't get me wrong ... I love this image ... I just think it would benefit hugely by tighter cropping.
I think cropping the bottom 1/4th of the image would improve this fine composition. Perhaps tilting the floor-line of the wall on the left to a horizontal would be pleasing.
I think I would have cropped out more of the floor in this. The ceiling is amazing and that needs to be made more of a focal point. Very little of the floor is in focus, and yetit occupies 1/3 of the ppicture.