A little piture I set up on my kitchen stove The bottom and background are burnt cooking sheets. I was trying to remove the battery cover, but once it was halfway torn I kind of liked it.
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Nice setting and lighting, I like that I have no idea where this was taken, but the imprinted words on the surface tell us this is an industrial environment. It just needs more content; too much negative space there. It's the beginning to something really cool.
Something isn't connecting for me with your message here. I like the tones and the props used for this photo, but I don't understand what those marks (beads, water, ???) are on the area in front of the battery, and how they contribute to the theme. In making these comments I needed to scroll down to do so, and in doing so noticed that your photo may have been composed a little stronger in a landscape mode rather than portrait by cropping off a good portion of the upper part. All JMO of course. Good luck in the challenge.
Very artsy shot! Nicely done. I wonder if cropping the top just a BIT more might have been a bit more powerful????? The focus on the battery might have been a bit more powerful had there not been quite so much space above it. That's about the only constructive critism I can give. I really like it!
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