Beautiful! As always, your work astounds me. I will make two humble critiques, however. It does not really make sense that the girl is holding a lantern in daylight. Also, the cropping on the left side is sort of awkward. But, I am a hypocrite when it comes to cropping.
DOF is very well executed in this photo, and face is perfectly lit. Something feels a trifle off balance - it may be the close crop on right arm. Whites also look just a tad blown on dress. Overall, very strong entry that would work outside this challenge as well. 8.
this is technically very smooth. does not get a strong pink floyd feeling out of it though. more a photo from a fashion magazine. but its kiinda absurd with the kerosine lamp in the daylight.
I like this one because I like the song mostly, but it is a good capture.. I'm sure you've already heard it or will hear it, but the clothing is a little too bright. Oh well though, and I'm not sure that the pine boughs closer to you that are out of focus really help the picture at all, they were kind of distracting. Overall, a good shot. 9
Colors are nice and focus is good. Nothing seems blown out. Nice DOF. The one eye looks like it has too much makeup compared to other which is a bit distracting.
This is a beutiful photograph and I love the DOP but it really bothers me that the story you are trying to show isn't fully realized. It's very bright and there is no light coming from the lantern. Would have worked much better if you had gotten rid of the lantern and just had the girl looking around. Seems a little blown out around her shoulder too.
makes no sense to me to go out with a light in the bright daylight. And why does she push a branch at the bottom while looking upwards? Lights are blown, don't like the cropped left arm and right thumb, too.
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