The lighting is excellent in this. The details are great so the focus is spot on. I would say the reason it scored the way it did is because the subject is not that interesting. I think a different perspective would have helped a little. Maybe looking at it from level and have a loaf of bread in the background just out of focus. But it is fine the way it is. Just with over 300+ entries most probably gave you a 5 and went to the next entry. You need to find a way to stop the viewer and make them think for a minute.