This is the second picture in this collection that could have been good because you are at a location where there were good subjects. I am sorry as I don't think you made good use of that.
for the first time ever i havent left my xmas shopping to the very last minute ... so the msg here no longer applies to me ... lol ... great shot by the way ... very christmas feel to it ..
There's a lot going on here but no single subject stood out for me. Maybe if one of the two people in the foreground were better lit or a bit closer, it'd have more impact.