4 - Lighting seems too harsh and too close/intrusive. A much 'gentler' image would likely have given this an edge in my opinion. Variation in the background fabric too, although the color is quite nice. Not sure on the black frame.
Great photo, I just wished you would have taken advantage of this challenge being an Advanced Editing challenge, and would have edited out the bright reflection on his eyes.
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
Photographer found comment helpful.
