Changed submissions last minute. That may be a bad sign...ugh..I'm scared about this one. But I need something for the WPL. a horrible score won't kill me will it?!?!?! :/
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great pic. Technically exellent. BUT! I would not have had the little girl with her arms crossed... I think that perhaps holding a flower just falling over her lap or something like that.
Technicals: I like the B&W idea but feel the conversion could have been done better to add a bit more drama. The ribbon on her face is in an unfortunate position and makes it look almost like headgear or something. Composition is nice although a bit centered.
Feel: I like the feel.
Score: 6
imo a little closer to the girl (with a drop of water near the eyes) would have made this shot so much better!! Grave at the back is getting merged with the trees in the background and causing the distraction .. a different angle perhaps ! - 7